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Woo Hoo! Page 5by ~jakface

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Page 5 of my new comic series, "Woo Hoo!"

We have introduced the title of the comic and also, A CHALLENGER APPEARS? Has he saved Jolee from a rather horrid, meaty fate? Stay tuned!

Artwork is by me. Dialogue and awesome background assist are by the gumdroppesque ~ClockworkVirus.

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WEBSITE IS STILL UNDER CONSTRUCTION SORRY AAAAAAA

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joy 2 2

wow 2 2

~~mad 0 0~~

~~sad 0 0~~

~~fear 0 0~~

~~neutral 0 0~~

~ObsessedFanficWriter Jul 15, 2012

Finally the amazing hero makes his entrance!
The drawings are great, as well as the colours. I hope I can buy it when it is released.

If I would criticise one thing, it's the hero's lines.
I would change: "Quickly! Don't eat that!" for "Stop! Don't eat that!", because 'quickly' has an affirmative tone to it. It's used when one wishes to stimulate someone to go ahead and do something. So, oif the hero wants to prevent the lady from eating the hamburger, he would certainly scream: Stop! He could also say 'Halt!', but it is way too formal.

Hope to see page 6 soon!

~jakface Jul 15, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Haha, actually, the entire point of "Quickly, don't eat that!" is that it doesn't make any sense grammatically. The entirety of Rhiys's lines will be very quirky, as you will see in upcoming pages.

Thanks for letting me know though!

If you notice anything else out of place, please feel free to let me know! <3